“Blankets”
Winter is cold, also snow is freezing
White blanket covers the land, how freezing
Spring is becoming warm, how delightful
Like a lemon green, the blanket changes
Summer is hot, swimming is the best sport
Green blanket covers the land, wonderful
Fall is cool to relax under the tree
Brown and yellow blankets cover the land
Every season, color of blanket change
How awesome that the earth changes blankets
The first and last line have 11 and 9 syllables, but the rest have 10.
답글삭제Simile 'like a lemon green', comparing the land to blankets.
I only focus on iambic pentameter that I don't do much of poetic devices like you...