2011년 2월 12일 토요일

Sonnet

LOVE

Last forever and happy together
No one could break us, no one could take us
We’re always together and forever
Happily ever after, that is for us

No ones with me, very sad and gloomy
We broke up, would someone know this feeling?
In some place all alone with no one with me
Love is painful do you get the meaning?

Alone but happy to see him all time
No one know what I feel and what I think
I’m afraid to ask him out on a date
Wish he stands in front of me when I blink

Love is something that no one knows at all
Love could be lovely, painful, or tangle

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  1. I love your trying for the iambic pentameter
    and I especially like the subject and theme about "LOVE."
    WOW...
    (all the format for a sonnet correct)

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